The two
One seeking, one looking to be found
The two
Have one, an ache that is anticipation
The two
The Carpenter and the Oak.
Seemingly symbiotic loving,
But what materialized, the end indeed
Chameleon loving.
In all hues, till death
And in death, see the hues, now blackened.
At first sight, as we know, love
Thus began the fairytale
Man and the Oak
Leaves evergreen, nature’s centerpiece
And in her wait to be adored
In her wait to be found
She anticipated gratitude.
Man and his cherished Oak
Man, very much in control
Oak, naively besotted
Oh he changed her!
And she didn’t mind, because love…
Each day he carved her
An edge here, a curve there
Man, the Carpenter
Man, the Refiner
He wanted her perfect
Her beautiful flaws, he smoothened out
He wanted shine
Her grainy appearance, he glossed up
Man and his polished Oak
His anticipation, that his efforts be rewarded
And that was so, by his “work of art”
But what happened next
Tragic, love so tragic!
He, Man, sought after another Oak
He, Man, gave her out, without blinking
And her forever now,
Anger, resentment, shame and unhappiness
Trapped in a cocoon
Stripped of raw beauty
Exposed, and he, Man, had not cared
Man and His Oak
This is what he did to nature.
A great pinewood.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! You make beautiful use of metaphors. Man has always tried making things the way he wants them in his grasping to become more than He who made everything….So sad….
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank You Skramblingeezer 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are more than welcome:):) How is life after the graduation?
LikeLike
It’s been okay. I had a three month break, currently doing my national service for a year(as a teaching assistant). God willing next year around fall, I start masters!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good for you! Keep us posted…:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
A nice analogy
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just today I looked out my window and decided to give my full attention to the oak tree there. A wave of sadness came over me. I was too afraid to find out what it was. Perhaps this explains it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Only now seeing this. Thanks for reading! Man needs to care more about his environment (exploring one of the themes through the poem)
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is beautiful
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
Phenomenal!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike