Have you taken notice?
The ringing, have you heard?
That that fills the ear
Tuning out one, joy or despair,
Still images play one by one
And today, the world lost one soul.
Do you know of it?
The ringing, how it captivates
That that leaves us statuesque,
Lost in distant thoughts
The pain clear for all to see
And today the world will feel sorry.
How long till it stops?
The ringing, a force so strong
That that steals time and motion
Taming every inch of flesh,
Freezing emotions while it can
And today the world doesn’t matter.
Very deep. I love it/
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow, beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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🙂 thanks for reading
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Beautiful thoughts and a lovely poem. Wonder why should the world matter anyways?
Cheers 🙂
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Haha! Thank you. It shouldn’t matter anyway. Was referring to the various activities that we all bustle about with when we’re not lost in thoughts. Thanks for reading
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Wow! I especially liked “freezing emotions while it can.”
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This makes me think of , “Ask not for whom the bell tolls….”
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Thanks for reading 🙂 If it’s the book by Ernest Hemingway you’re referring to, I haven’t read it yet.
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Thanks for following my blog-I follow back. I like how you used “that that” in your poem and “the ringing have you heard?” Keep up the good work. Cheers!
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I will. Thanks for the follow, more poems your way every month 🙂
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Soulful. Thanks for dropping by chatterboxerr.. Love thy blog!
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I will again! Thanks for checking out my blog 🙂
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