I’ve been downhearted too long.
Caught up in the flurry of the world.
Today, this very moment, I kneel on bowed knees,
Looking to find solace in the comforter’s hands.
Caught up in the flurry of the world,
I was a lost soul living unhappily.
Looking to find solace in the comforter’s hands
In pieces I came, and peace I received.
I was a lost soul living unhappily,
Angered by everything around me.
In pieces I came, and peace I received,
When I finally understood thankfulness .
Angered by everything around me,
I had fueled a toxic mind.
When I finally understood thankfulness,
I found my lost hope and renewed my faith.
Now read from bottom to top 🙂
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Thanks! Will do
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Very nice!
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Thank You!
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Lovely feeling of song, Elsie 🙂
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🙂 Thanks Laine
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Very clever while maintaining depth. I like it. 🙂
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Glad you do. Thank you Eric.
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That was brilliant! Thanks for the follow, can’t wait to read more of your writing.
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely and much needed today, at this moment.
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🙂 great!
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I really like the idea of reading a poem from beginning to end and then in reverse. It’s a bit like taking a journey and then returning home along the same road and seeing it from different aspects.
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Well Said. Thanks for reading!
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Oh WOW, this is phenomenal–well done. I related to it, could feel the feelings and rhthm…..now you have me wondering if I could do one that can be read from bottom to top as well, hmmmm. God bless you today.
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Thank you! Wasn’t too difficult to write this. I’m sure you can do one 🙂
Stay blessed too.
Elsie
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Wonderful piece of art.I like that
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Thank you!!
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You spoke from your heart it moved me.
honey
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Thank you.
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Very nice flow:-)
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Thank you 🙂
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