The moon saw my eyes and dimmed a little,
When I told them you said you would go and never come back.
Fireflies gathered round and made me feel warm.
I spoke to the wind, asking if I would be okay?
And it simply made me swirl around merrily.
The lake formed an image of a happy girl, her heart smiling out and looking towards a bright future.
So letting go is what I do. Every mistake is a lesson for the future.
The following morning was reminiscent of how I searched for your star last night.
The one that lit up the whole sky and made my previous nights beautiful.
I gave it back; someday it would make another soul’s night beautiful like it did for mine.I told the flowers which were all up in my face as if to offer themselves as hankies that my tears were saved for joyous occasions henceforth,
Those days I couldn’t breathe, today the thorns decided that every other day from now on would be a field day.
The stones, they said to me they would stay out of my way so I wouldn’t stumble or fall.
The doors of happiness said they wouldn’t shut me out like you did
And the usually rapid rivers said for my sake they would carry me gently to the ‘forgetting you island’.
i really like poems with such themes .:)
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Me too 🙂
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Lovely! You’re great with metaphor. It’s something I struggle with, I find myself being confined by gritty realism. That was a pleasure to read.
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Lol. Well thank you for reading. Hope you have a lovely day 🙂
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This was wonderful, made me smile as I read it and think I need to remember this.
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Thank you again for reading! 🙂
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Nice piece…really lovely to read.
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Thanks
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Very nice poem, very well written too.
When someone leaves, that’s because someone else is about to arrive.
Subhan Zein
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Well said 🙂
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Beautiful, and very grounded to the earth, mindful of the earth and to senses of the “now.” Very nice!
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Merci 🙂
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Reblogged this on A Talkative Being Himself.
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A great piece. What particularly resonated with me was the line, ” That morning was reminiscent of how I searched for your star last night.” This so intrinsic to our nature of forgetting to live in and appreciate the moment and becoming nostalgic of what we can never get back. And as we wallow in the past like this, we once again miss the bus with our present…..
Shakti
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Very true! we must enjoy the moment and suck it in while we still have it so that in the future we can look back and at least be happy we had that moment once. Thanks for reading.
Elsie.
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Awhile back I too had mused on this aspect and you may wish to read it.
http://esgeemusings.com/2012/03/15/happiness-and-the-theory-of-relativity/
Cheers
Shakti
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Thank you for these consoling verses. Sometimes in the face of loss, we forget the kindness around us… we forget there are helpers, but only when we are ready to listen…
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Yes, we accept the love we deserve. It’s about opening our eyes to really see those who care for us truly.
Thank you for reading, good day!
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What resonates with me in this beautiful poem is the way you have brought in the aspect of ” letting go”. As we develop this awareness and skill to ” let go” and not get attached to aspects of life out of sheer habit, wondrous possibilities would appear for the future.
Loved it!
Shakti
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Thank you so much for following my blog! It means a lot to me. 🙂 Continue making beautiful works and touch people’s hearts. 🙂
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Thank you too! Stay blessed 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Great poem, i enjoyed reading it. Keep up the nice rhymes and words u r writing!!!
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Thanks a lot! Will do
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Hello- I just wanted to stop by & let you know that I nominated your work for “Blog of the Year 2012!” More details can be found here: http://arcanearrangements.com/2013/01/25/blog-of-the-year-2012-part-two/ Keep up the great work & enjoy the day! 🙂
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Thanks!!!
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You are very welcome! Have a great one! 🙂
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Love the nature take on this beautifully written passage. Thank you for sharing your talent. 😊
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🙂 Thank you too!!
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I usually don’t get touch easily while reeding in a different language then mine, but your poems are so unique and so touching ! greeting 🙂
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😀 Thank you very much!
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Very earthy, love the writing!
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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My pleasure! Thank you too for stopping by!
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Beautiful Imagery!
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Thank you!
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